用詞原則
1.用詞要簡(jiǎn)潔
能一個(gè)詞表達(dá)清楚的意思,就不要加上多余的成分,另外還要注意不要造句成意義上的重復(fù)累贅。
如:
原句:What you have done is illegal under the law .
優(yōu)化:What you have done is illegal .
2.用詞要多樣
注意不要一味地重復(fù)使用某個(gè)詞匯,可適當(dāng)轉(zhuǎn)換成同義詞或短語(yǔ)。也不要一=味地使用同一種詞性,要學(xué)會(huì)使用不同的詞性。
如:
原句:This can definitely make them work more enthusiastically .
優(yōu)化:This can definitely stimulate their working enthusiasm .
3.多用樸素、易懂的詞
對(duì)考生來(lái)說(shuō),生僻或華麗的辭藻駕馭起來(lái)比較難,很容易使用不當(dāng),很多時(shí)候不但不能給文章增色,反而可能會(huì)使閱卷老師困惑,起到負(fù)面作用。因此,建議考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量選用自己熟悉的詞語(yǔ)。
如:
原句:Parents in China always have altereations about their childrens education .
優(yōu)化:Parents in China always have quarrels about their childrens education .
4.多用具體的詞
如果詞的概括性太強(qiáng),往往讓人覺(jué)得抽象、籠統(tǒng),會(huì)給人模糊不清的感覺(jué),詞義比較具體的詞會(huì)使表達(dá)更加準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)。
如:
原句:Some people like to read the newspaper very quickly and try to find some interesting stories .
優(yōu)化:Some people like to flip through the newspaper and try to find some interesting stories .
5.注意使用限定詞
當(dāng)定作時(shí)適當(dāng)使用限定詞來(lái)修飾可以使論述更加客觀、適度,避免觀點(diǎn)的絕對(duì)化。
如:
In general , young people seem more prone to job-hopping .
Nowadays the increasingly severe employment situation is perhaps the biggest challenge facing college students .
1.用詞要簡(jiǎn)潔
能一個(gè)詞表達(dá)清楚的意思,就不要加上多余的成分,另外還要注意不要造句成意義上的重復(fù)累贅。
如:
原句:What you have done is illegal under the law .
優(yōu)化:What you have done is illegal .
2.用詞要多樣
注意不要一味地重復(fù)使用某個(gè)詞匯,可適當(dāng)轉(zhuǎn)換成同義詞或短語(yǔ)。也不要一=味地使用同一種詞性,要學(xué)會(huì)使用不同的詞性。
如:
原句:This can definitely make them work more enthusiastically .
優(yōu)化:This can definitely stimulate their working enthusiasm .
3.多用樸素、易懂的詞
對(duì)考生來(lái)說(shuō),生僻或華麗的辭藻駕馭起來(lái)比較難,很容易使用不當(dāng),很多時(shí)候不但不能給文章增色,反而可能會(huì)使閱卷老師困惑,起到負(fù)面作用。因此,建議考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量選用自己熟悉的詞語(yǔ)。
如:
原句:Parents in China always have altereations about their childrens education .
優(yōu)化:Parents in China always have quarrels about their childrens education .
4.多用具體的詞
如果詞的概括性太強(qiáng),往往讓人覺(jué)得抽象、籠統(tǒng),會(huì)給人模糊不清的感覺(jué),詞義比較具體的詞會(huì)使表達(dá)更加準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)。
如:
原句:Some people like to read the newspaper very quickly and try to find some interesting stories .
優(yōu)化:Some people like to flip through the newspaper and try to find some interesting stories .
5.注意使用限定詞
當(dāng)定作時(shí)適當(dāng)使用限定詞來(lái)修飾可以使論述更加客觀、適度,避免觀點(diǎn)的絕對(duì)化。
如:
In general , young people seem more prone to job-hopping .
Nowadays the increasingly severe employment situation is perhaps the biggest challenge facing college students .