訓(xùn)練（11）及參考范文

　　開(kāi)放作文(15分)

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。

　　In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

　　基本分析：

　　1. 三分之一描寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光，樓(很靠近)，彎曲的樹(shù)。（the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree）

　　2. 三分之二議論著眼立意：

　　—— 1.人生角度：在成長(zhǎng)的道路上（樹(shù)的成長(zhǎng)），有曲折，有困難，（建筑的阻擋，彎曲）但是只要向著光明和希望（太陽(yáng)）去努力拼搏，堅(jiān)持不懈，還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功（樹(shù)在樓的夾縫中長(zhǎng)高了，超出建筑）。

　　—— 2.和諧角度： 城市的發(fā)展（建筑）和環(huán)境的可持續(xù)發(fā)展（樹(shù)的成長(zhǎng)）要協(xié)調(diào)，要平衡，才能欣然共存（在陽(yáng)光下）

　　3. 立意與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活關(guān)系：1. 引導(dǎo)90后要具有積極的生活態(tài)度，生活非一帆風(fēng)順的。2. 扣住低碳生活的環(huán)保熱點(diǎn)，城市和環(huán)境的和諧發(fā)展也是低碳生活的必需。

　　***********************************************************結(jié)束

　　預(yù)測(cè)五：

　　近年微博（microblog）在中國(guó)越來(lái)越流行，2011年也被有關(guān)媒體稱(chēng)為“微博元年”。假設(shè)你是校報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示為校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇介紹微博的英語(yǔ)短文。1.非常方便，人們可以隨時(shí)利用微博來(lái)表達(dá)心聲，交流想法；2.給人們提供了一種釋放壓力的方式；3.與朋友分享心情，增進(jìn)他們之間的了解；4.也有潛在的危險(xiǎn)，有可能泄露個(gè)人隱私或其他重要信息；5.綜上所述，使用微博要謹(jǐn)慎。詞數(shù)：100左右（已給部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Microblog has become part of our life.

　　【參考范文】Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

　　預(yù)測(cè)六：

　　為開(kāi)展“敬老”活動(dòng)，你校特意邀請(qǐng)了梁會(huì)蘭女士來(lái)做報(bào)告。梁會(huì)蘭女士是北京下崗工人，16年來(lái)，她義務(wù)照顧十幾位孤寡老人和殘疾老人的生活起居。請(qǐng)你據(jù)此以校學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫(xiě)一個(gè)通知，要點(diǎn)如下：1.報(bào)告的目的；2.報(bào)告人介紹；3.報(bào)告時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：2011年12月26日下午4:00~6:00,學(xué)校報(bào)告廳；4.參加人員：全體學(xué)生。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

　　3.通知的格式已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union

　　【參考范文】

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,In order to call on everybody to respect the elderly,our school will invite Ms Liang Huilan to give us a report.Liang Huilan,a laid off worker in Beijing,has been voluntarily taking good care of more than ten elderly people who live alone or have disabilities over the past 16 years,for which she has won great respect from people around her and has been awarded various honors by the government.The report will be given in the lecture hall of our school on the afternoon of December 26,and it will last two hours(from 4:00 p.m.to 6:00 p.m.).All the students are required to attend it.Don’t be late.

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union

　　訓(xùn)練（11）及參考范文

　　開(kāi)放作文(15分)

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。

　　In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

　　基本分析：

　　1. 三分之一描寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光，樓(很靠近)，彎曲的樹(shù)。（the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree）

　　2. 三分之二議論著眼立意：

　　—— 1.人生角度：在成長(zhǎng)的道路上（樹(shù)的成長(zhǎng)），有曲折，有困難，（建筑的阻擋，彎曲）但是只要向著光明和希望（太陽(yáng)）去努力拼搏，堅(jiān)持不懈，還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功（樹(shù)在樓的夾縫中長(zhǎng)高了，超出建筑）。

　　—— 2.和諧角度： 城市的發(fā)展（建筑）和環(huán)境的可持續(xù)發(fā)展（樹(shù)的成長(zhǎng)）要協(xié)調(diào)，要平衡，才能欣然共存（在陽(yáng)光下）

　　3. 立意與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活關(guān)系：1. 引導(dǎo)90后要具有積極的生活態(tài)度，生活非一帆風(fēng)順的。2. 扣住低碳生活的環(huán)保熱點(diǎn)，城市和環(huán)境的和諧發(fā)展也是低碳生活的必需。

　　***********************************************************結(jié)束

　　預(yù)測(cè)五：

　　近年微博（microblog）在中國(guó)越來(lái)越流行，2011年也被有關(guān)媒體稱(chēng)為“微博元年”。假設(shè)你是校報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示為校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇介紹微博的英語(yǔ)短文。1.非常方便，人們可以隨時(shí)利用微博來(lái)表達(dá)心聲，交流想法；2.給人們提供了一種釋放壓力的方式；3.與朋友分享心情，增進(jìn)他們之間的了解；4.也有潛在的危險(xiǎn)，有可能泄露個(gè)人隱私或其他重要信息；5.綜上所述，使用微博要謹(jǐn)慎。詞數(shù)：100左右（已給部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Microblog has become part of our life.

　　【參考范文】Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

　　預(yù)測(cè)六：

　　為開(kāi)展“敬老”活動(dòng)，你校特意邀請(qǐng)了梁會(huì)蘭女士來(lái)做報(bào)告。梁會(huì)蘭女士是北京下崗工人，16年來(lái)，她義務(wù)照顧十幾位孤寡老人和殘疾老人的生活起居。請(qǐng)你據(jù)此以校學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫(xiě)一個(gè)通知，要點(diǎn)如下：1.報(bào)告的目的；2.報(bào)告人介紹；3.報(bào)告時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：2011年12月26日下午4:00~6:00,學(xué)校報(bào)告廳；4.參加人員：全體學(xué)生。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

　　3.通知的格式已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union

　　【參考范文】

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,In order to call on everybody to respect the elderly,our school will invite Ms Liang Huilan to give us a report.Liang Huilan,a laid off worker in Beijing,has been voluntarily taking good care of more than ten elderly people who live alone or have disabilities over the past 16 years,for which she has won great respect from people around her and has been awarded various honors by the government.The report will be given in the lecture hall of our school on the afternoon of December 26,and it will last two hours(from 4:00 p.m.to 6:00 p.m.).All the students are required to attend it.Don’t be late.

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union