河北省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：

　　短文改錯+書面表達（76）

　　短文改錯

　　假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.

　　China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for

　　them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has

　　caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the

　　Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of

　　shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.

　　They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use

　　these cloth bags instead plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help

　　書面表達

　　現在，很多中學生每天長時間用耳機聽音樂、學英語。你的英語筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來信中提到感覺頭痛、注意力不集中、汜憶力減退。請你就此回信談談你的觀點和建議。

　　寫作要點：

　　1．簡述過度使用耳機的現象；

　　2．分析過度使用耳機的危害；

　　3．提出你的建議。

　　注意：

　　1．要點齊全，可適當添加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　2．字數100左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　3．可能用到的詞匯：耳機earphone It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.

　　got

　　China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for

　　and/so

　　them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has

　　used

　　caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the

　　easy

　　Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of

　　are

　　shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.

　　students

　　an

　　They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use

　　these cloth bags instead ∧plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help

　　of

　　their

　　protect the environment.

　　One Possible Version

　　Dear Li Ping,

　　I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Lin Tao

　　河北省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：

　　短文改錯+書面表達（76）

　　短文改錯

　　假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.

　　China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for

　　them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has

　　caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the

　　Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of

　　shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.

　　They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use

　　these cloth bags instead plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help

　　書面表達

　　現在，很多中學生每天長時間用耳機聽音樂、學英語。你的英語筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來信中提到感覺頭痛、注意力不集中、汜憶力減退。請你就此回信談談你的觀點和建議。

　　寫作要點：

　　1．簡述過度使用耳機的現象；

　　2．分析過度使用耳機的危害；

　　3．提出你的建議。

　　注意：

　　1．要點齊全，可適當添加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　2．字數100左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　3．可能用到的詞匯：耳機earphone It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.

　　got

　　China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for

　　and/so

　　them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has

　　used

　　caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the

　　easy

　　Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of

　　are

　　shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.

　　students

　　an

　　They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use

　　these cloth bags instead ∧plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help

　　of

　　their

　　protect the environment.

　　One Possible Version

　　Dear Li Ping,

　　I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Lin Tao