浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（82）
浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（）
短文改錯（滿分10分）
下面短文中有10處錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加，刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students slept less than
nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main
cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while
doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is some
students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.
Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,
teachers should encourage their students make good use of their spare time.
第二節：書面表達（滿分30分）
隨著電腦普及率的提高，老師、家長和學生對字跡的重視程度降低了。據一項調查顯示，有85.8％的中學生說自己的字跡不好看，而他們又不想改善字跡，其理由有很大差別。請根據下圖寫一篇100–120詞的英文短文，說明該現象并發表自己的看法。
可以用電腦寫字
51.5%
沒有時間練
32.3%
沒有什么用
10.9%
其他[
5.3%
改錯
A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students slept less than
based
nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main
cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while
in
doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is∧some
waste
that
students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.
early
(或加is)
Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,
homework
Besides
teachers should encourage their students∧make good use of their spare time.
to
作文：
One possible version:
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.
According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise. 10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.
As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（）
短文改錯（滿分10分）
下面短文中有10處錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加，刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1，每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students slept less than
nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main
cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while
doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is some
students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.
Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,
teachers should encourage their students make good use of their spare time.
第二節：書面表達（滿分30分）
隨著電腦普及率的提高，老師、家長和學生對字跡的重視程度降低了。據一項調查顯示，有85.8％的中學生說自己的字跡不好看，而他們又不想改善字跡，其理由有很大差別。請根據下圖寫一篇100–120詞的英文短文，說明該現象并發表自己的看法。
可以用電腦寫字
51.5%
沒有時間練
32.3%
沒有什么用
10.9%
其他[
5.3%
改錯
A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students slept less than
based
nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main
cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while
in
doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is∧some
waste
that
students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.
early
(或加is)
Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,
homework
Besides
teachers should encourage their students∧make good use of their spare time.
to
作文：
One possible version:
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.
According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise. 10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.
As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
